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The Design Hero!

Joined: 09 Aug 2010 Posts: 2 Location: Wolverhampton, UK
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:50 pm Post subject: www.creativeben.co.uk |
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Hi there!
If you are interested in web design or graphic design - you might find my website worth a look.
http://www.creativeben.co.uk
I'm a designer by trade and use nethosted as my primary source for hosting my clients.
Love the excellent service so far! _________________ "Who Dares Wins" - SAS Motto
Visit My Website - creativeben.co.uk
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| Z |
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NetHosted Customer
Joined: 29 Jan 2005 Posts: 382
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:23 am Post subject: |
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nice. a couple of quick type observations
"KissPC - Local computer technical suport company who needed an idenity."
Letterheads is all one word.
Advertisements not advertisments.
"commonly known as photoshoping or airbrushing."
Photoshopping? _________________ Getting the hang of it slowly (subject to comment) |
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NetHosted Customer
Joined: 29 Jan 2005 Posts: 382
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:59 am Post subject: |
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and "its always useful to ask questions" _________________ Getting the hang of it slowly (subject to comment) |
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| UserFriendly |
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Community Liason
Joined: 05 May 2005 Posts: 212 Location: Nottingham
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:17 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, looking good. Just needs a few tweaks.
- Logo top left should link to your home page. Email top right should be clickable.
- Facebook link needs a Facebook icon like you have for Twitter.
- "hi, im ben" should be "hi, i'm ben".
- On the Portfolio > Web Design page, the << Print Design & Logo Design >> links are broken. _________________ http://theunusualsuspect.com/ |
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NetHosted Customer
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 148
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:22 am Post subject: |
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- "hi, im ben" should be "hi, i'm ben".
| I'd prefer: "Hi, I'm Ben" - I don't think the trendy lowercase element works when the rest of the content uses capitals properly. |
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NetHosted Staff

Joined: 24 Jun 2005 Posts: 1021
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:31 am Post subject: |
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I'd also edit the title tag and meta description, both of these are what show up in the google search results, whilst keywords are useful these should be written with a view to getting people into your site. They are often the first impression you make if your customer is arriving via search, if they aren't enticing then you will miss that visitor and that chance of a new customer, searching for creativeben in Google at the moment doesn't give a great impression of your site.
On a positive the design looks clean and crisp  _________________ | Darryl Taylor
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| creativeben |
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The Design Hero!

Joined: 09 Aug 2010 Posts: 2 Location: Wolverhampton, UK
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:00 pm Post subject: thanks |
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Thank you everyone for your suggestions, I will make the amends you suggested!  _________________ "Who Dares Wins" - SAS Motto
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